Edit Your Own Writing (by Erik Hare)

Good writing, as a craft, starts with a rough piece that needs sanding, polishing, and a good coat of lacquer before it shines.  The skills you must learn to edit your own writing are not difficult, but they are critical.  Here are a few tips and ways of thinking that will help you hone your work into a useful and beautiful piece.

Changeup  – The best way to read your own writing critically is to change the circumstances when you edit.  Start and end your editing process by reading your piece out loud. If you write on a computer in the quiet of your office, print it out and take it to a noisy coffee shop.  Pay close attention to the rhythm of language as much as the topic itself as that will help put you in your reader’s mind.

Audience  – Verify that you are speaking directly to your audience before you do anything else to edit your own writing.  Read your piece with a clear vision of who it speaks to and why the topic you have written is important to them.  The reporter’s five Ws – who, what, when, where, and why – should be clear and stated up front, usually in the first paragraph.

Reading is Writing  – The reader of your piece must decode language into a clear image.  The process they use is very much like writing itself. When you edit your own writing take a step back and read it as if someone else wrote the piece.  Does it flow?  Does it engage the imagination?  Clarity, not cleverness, marks the strongest and most memorable work.

One Topic  – The strongest pieces are going to be about one thing only.  Examples that inform that topic from a different perspective can work, but they have to be directly related to what the piece is about.  Before you edit with a detailed eye be sure that your subject is well covered and is not diluted by unrelated topics.

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Active Voice  – Once you are clear on the major issues, you can start paying attention to detail.  Conversational writing in blogs naturally tends…[Keep Reading… Edit Your Own Writing.]

Which Name?

I am trying to come up with names for a new character that I’m creating for my novel.

She is a stern, but kind, short, pretty, blond 30 year old. And her last name is going to be Blythe.

Take the poll and tell me which you like better.

Thanks for the help!

Sincerely,
Ivy